Thank you for providing us your review of the feedback that you received. It will help us all out since we see other people's mistakes and learn from it as well as spot things that we had not previously thought about. I would have enjoyed to see a second elevator pitch, however. You could have filmed yourself doing another elevator pitch and posted that instead of talking about what you could have changed. Anyways, I think you did a great job.
Hey Clayton, I liked how you were able to understand the feedback your classmates have you given you thus far. I think constructive criticism is nice and should always be welcomed as it is used in a positive light not to be malicious or hurtful. We just want you to do well and excel. I also thought you had the perfect place to conduct your pitch. I chose a bathroom and it looked quite awkward.
Hey Clayton,
ReplyDeleteThank you for providing us your review of the feedback that you received. It will help us all out since we see other people's mistakes and learn from it as well as spot things that we had not previously thought about. I would have enjoyed to see a second elevator pitch, however. You could have filmed yourself doing another elevator pitch and posted that instead of talking about what you could have changed. Anyways, I think you did a great job.
Hey Clayton,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you were able to understand the feedback your classmates have you given you thus far. I think constructive criticism is nice and should always be welcomed as it is used in a positive light not to be malicious or hurtful. We just want you to do well and excel. I also thought you had the perfect place to conduct your pitch. I chose a bathroom and it looked quite awkward.